Friday 10 May 2019

Kea Patrol Persuasive Writing


Kea Patrol

I strongly believe that we should keep road patrol for these reasons. Kea patrol gives older people to be helpful and good role models. Sometimes kids have trouble crossing the road and the State Highway 6  gets really dangerous and busy after school at 3pm.

Firstly, I strongly believe that we should have kea patrol because some kids like the juniors have trouble crossing the road so the need a mature person to help them cross the road.  If the little kids see a older person from this school cross the road by themselves they might follow in your footsteps and might trip and hurt themselves. Something terrible might happen.

Secondly, You all should know that sometimes the Main South Road gets really busy and dangerous. The State Highway 6 is the only way in and out of Greymouth so it’s really busy. We should have Kea patrol so the vehicles know when to stop. If we didn’t children could trip and cars might not of seen them like trucks because they are so high up. There has been a few car accidents on State Highway 6 so people need to be aware.

Finally, I believe that kea patrol gives the older kids to have a chance at being a role model and to  make sure kids cross the State Highway 6 properly and not being silly. If we didn’t have kea patrol the little kids can put themselves in danger. The seniors  are taking up their afternoon time to help people cross the road when they haven’t been asked.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that we should keep road patrol because on the State Highway 6 because the main south road gets really busy and dangerous so we need someone to help. The little kids sometimes need help crossing the road and that older kids have a chance at being helpful and being a good role model. Kea patrol  keeps people secure.

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