Well done for writing your recount about our trip. It was great to see that you sequenced your information and that you had good spelling and punctuation. Your next step is to work on using more interesting language and describing things. I'm glad you enjoyed going to the rocky shore and seeing all the creatures.
Hi Milan, It sounds like you had a super fun trip, the beach is a very special place and we all need to make sure that we look after our beaches and don't drop litter on them. I loved the photos and your story - the wee cushion starfish was very cute! We need to take Willow to the beach again soon xx Love Mum xx
Kia ora Milan
ReplyDeleteWell done for writing your recount about our trip. It was great to see that you sequenced your information and that you had good spelling and punctuation. Your next step is to work on using more interesting language and describing things. I'm glad you enjoyed going to the rocky shore and seeing all the creatures.
Hi Milan,
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like you had a super fun trip, the beach is a very special place and we all need to make sure that we look after our beaches and don't drop litter on them.
I loved the photos and your story - the wee cushion starfish was very cute!
We need to take Willow to the beach again soon xx
Love Mum xx