Descriptive Dinosaur Writing

At the moment in class, we have been working on descriptive writing. We have been using pictures to give us ideas of what to write about. Here Is my piece of writing I did.

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The Dinosaur egg

One Original day In London, my dream was to become a scientist and discover dinosaur eggs, and that dream finally came true. In 2019 I started working at the DEA (Dinosaur Explore Academy). On my first day there, I could see the holograms of all the dinosaurs it was so fascinating.

After I got a tour, my boss put me in charge of the 3 eggs. Then I heard a crack,  crunch. I ran to my Boss and I said, “The eggs cracked!! Come on!. We looked at the dinosaurs and the expert said they were all Spinosaurus.

Its now 2024, the Dinosaurs are in an enclosure and we don't know what do do with them, because if we let them free, you will know what will happen.

One day I got a job to do from my boss, he told me to go into the enclosure and tame them. “What…. I need to Practice!” I exclaimed. He said there is no time for that, so I got into my gear and went into the enclosure. I looked for them in there and I couldn’t find them. Then I heard something; a scream went over there and I saw the dinosaurs smashing everything around with broken glass on the floor I could smell fire like I'm in the hot desert. I Climbed up the wall into the room, then one dinosaur when Straight, the other went left and the other went right to my area where I work. I went to the emergency room with the tranquilizer gun and went right. I sprinted like a racing car, then I got chased by one of them I went into the escape room and ran out “This is a bad idea” I say to myself. Two seconds later im corned.

To Be Continued.