My Eyes - Best Part of Me Writing

Learning Intentions

I am learning to use language features to make my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.

I am learning to think carefully about the words I use so that my writing is descriptive and engaging for the reader.

I am learning to add an appropriate visual to my work

I will be successful when I can show….

-I have used some language features to make my writing interesting and engaging (smile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)

-I have carefully chosen some interesting words to include in my writing

-I have some descriptive words in my writing (adjectives)

-I have added a photo to my writing


My Eyes

My eyes are green like grass. They help me see new places like a whole new world.
They see beautiful things that people do. When I'm angry and sad they show emotions

with tears. My eyes see my lovely whānau (family). They see what's gone and see whats coming.