I am really pleased to see your science work up on your blog. You have shown me that you are developing an understanding of the water cycle and that you have learnt the meaning of some great science words. You did a good job at writing all this up and explaining it in your video but you need to keep working on making sure your sentences make sense. You spoke clearly and showed you had a lot of great knowledge in your video. An area you could have improved was explaining that evaporation is when the water heats up from the sun and turns into a gas (water vapour) that then rises up into the air.
I couldn't fin your video for 'An Interview With A Glass of Water.' Did you do this?
It was good to see that you could also explain the states of matter.
Thanks for sharing your work. Ka pai tō mahi pūtaiao!
Kia ora Milan
ReplyDeleteI am really pleased to see your science work up on your blog. You have shown me that you are developing an understanding of the water cycle and that you have learnt the meaning of some great science words. You did a good job at writing all this up and explaining it in your video but you need to keep working on making sure your sentences make sense. You spoke clearly and showed you had a lot of great knowledge in your video. An area you could have improved was explaining that evaporation is when the water heats up from the sun and turns into a gas (water vapour) that then rises up into the air.
I couldn't fin your video for 'An Interview With A Glass of Water.' Did you do this?
It was good to see that you could also explain the states of matter.
Thanks for sharing your work. Ka pai tō mahi pūtaiao!