Persuasive Writing-Why We Should Fix Our Field.

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. Here is my piece of writing about why we should fix our field.

Title A Short Rugby League Is A Great Sport’ statement about the topic. eg. ‘	Please Fix Our Field
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	I truly Believe you should fix our field soon as possible. This is because we need the field to train for sports,  we need the field for special events, we have PE gear we can’t use. and our PE equipment keeps going over the fence.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	Firstly,I strongly believe We need the field because we need to train for touch and Rippa Rugby, keep fit and hold events.
	Secondly, mostly every year we have a gala and hangi but we might not have enough space to run all the events.
	Thirdly, we have to much PE equipment so we need more space incase someone gets a injury.
	Finally, our PE equipment keeps going over the fence and teaches are only allowed to get it and the all our equipment.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	In conclusion my supportive reasons are the gala, training for sport and we need the field because there are lots of people at our school and it is too crowded and lots of people are getting banged around.

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