Quick Write Term 4

We have been working on ‘Quick Writes.’  This is where you are given something to write about (a writing prompt) and you only have 10 minutes to write as much as possible using this writing prompt. For our writing prompts we will use either images or short videos.

1) Fireworks

As I walked down the hill I saw colourful smoke bombs everywhere around the building, as I walked in, it blinded me. I was suffocating  as I walked through it. Everyone is in fear, I felt heavy like I was sinking under water. The smoke bombs were Karaka, (Orange) Whero (Red) and Tawa (Purple). The crowd was making lots of confused noise.



2) A Stormy Day

As I Walked Home On A Stormy Day.

As I walked home from Whare kura(school) I felt the wind pushing against me like I would have to turn back.

I hear the thunder rumbling in the sky like Ranginui wants to come back down to earth again. I saw the lightning flashing into my eyes like it was blinding me.  

As I got home I felt the warmth from the heaters.

3) Spiderman

Spiderman

As I walk into New York City I see Kakano(colours) lots of kakano.

I smell the kai from across the road it smells like candy.

I hear the bus tires screeching on the road

I feel the breeze coming to me when the cars go past.

I taste the candy that I got and it tastes sweet.

4) Tomato pulp

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The Great Tomato Festival

As I walk to the city centre of Spain I could hear everyone laughing. I could smell the smell of the fresh new tomatoes.

When I looked at everyone they had tomatoes all over their body. I could feel the tomato seeds underneath my feet. It was sticky and yucky.